Polskie forum o Linkin Park i koncercie na Orange Warsaw Festival 2012

[LDC]

Jestem ciekawa, co myślicie o moim najnowszym 'dziecku'- alternatywnym tekście do 'New Divide'. Oto on:
(1)
I REMEMBER HER EYES
FEAR UNDER THEIR SURFACE
I REMEMBER HER LIPS
OF CIGARETTE SMOKE
THERE WERE SCARS ON HER BACK
THAT HADN'T DISAPPEARED

BUT HER PALMS WERE ALL I'VE FELT
SO I LOST MYSELF IN HER

(Ch)
I STILL CAN FEEL HER
ON MY SKIN
AND TASTE HER ON MY TONGUE
I CAN SEE HER NOW
EVENTUALLY BREAKING DOWN
STILL CLAIMING SHE'S ALRIGHT

(2)
AFTER ALL OF THOSE WRONGS
HER HEART BEGAN TO HURT
AFTER ALL OF THOSE WOUNDS
I WISHED SHE CURED HER SOUL
BUT SHE KEPT PAIN IN
TO KNOW IF SHE'S ALIVE

AND HER PALMS WERE ALL I'VE FELT
SO I LOST MYSELF AGAIN

(B)
HER EVERY WORD/ SHE ALWAYS LIED
IN EACH EMBRACE AND EACH GOOD-BYE
AND SINGLE KISS/ EVERY NIGHT
WAS EVERYTHING SHE HAD TO HIDE

AND HER PALMS WERE ALL I'VE FELT
SO I LOST MYSELF AGAIN

A z tego wyewoluowało to, tym razem bez żadnej melodii:

ONCE/ THERE WAS
BLEEDING WOUND ON HER BACK/ SHE'S CRYING
TELL HER TO STOP THE TEARS/ SHE'S TRYING
SHE FEELS GUILTY/ FILTHY/ STAMPED FOREVER
BUT STILL SHE KNOWS LIFE IS NOW OR NEVER
SO SHE WALKS WITH HER HEAD HELD HIGH
AND EVEN IF SHE CRIES IT'S JUST AT NIGHT
THEN/SHE HAS
TURNED HER SCAR INTO A TATOO/ SHE'S HEALING
BUT DESPITE WHAT THEY SAY/ SHE'S NOT FEELING
ALRIGHT/ BECAUSE THERE'S STILL A PROBLEM
HER MEMORIES/ SHE JUST CAN'T BLOCK THEM
SO SHE FAINTS/ SHE'S SUFFOCATING
THEN GETS UP/ STILL HIPERVENTILATING
NOT GIVEN UP AT ALL

SHE KEEPS HER THOUGHTS LOCKED UP
SHE NEVER SAYS WHAT'S ON HER MIND
SHE HIDES ALL THAT SHE'S GOT
SHE FEARS THEY'LL TAKE IT ALL AWAY
SO NIGHTMARES DON'T STOP

I jak?

[Saika]

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